OPINION ESSAY
There are many people doing sport in the world, but lots of those people don’t know the importance of doing sports. I’ll explain some benefits of doing sport which I consider that are the most important and the negative effects.
The main advantage I consider of doing sport is to be healthy and fit. Every kind of sport can keep you fit and doing regularly sport makes you be healthy and it reduced the possibility of having diseases. It also decreases the risks of having high blood pressure, obesity, especially in children, and there is even less possibility of having some types of cancer. I consider another advantage that you relate with other people that play the same sport and it is so fun, especially in team sports where you can also learn to be part of a team.
There are also some disadvantages of doing sport. For example when children play a sport maybe they broke a bone that it is not completely make and the bone can’t grow because it is broken. Depending on the sport you play you can become more aggressive and do not relate with others. A disadvantage of team sports is that if you have a bad manager who is only interested in his own ego and don’t help the people he train.
To sum up I think there are more important the advantages than the disadvantages and I recommend to everybody to play sport.
Good work! However there is some confusion with verb tenses.
ReplyDeleteI tryed to do the best I can, thanks!
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